Kauai/Princeville day 2
Another productive writing day; this final stage is always so gratifying, as every tweak seems to make for significant improvements in one way or another. After today’s writing, only feeling that the ending section could use a bit of tightening up as it feels a tad longer than necessary. Just another listen through will put it in proper perspective.
As I’m now thinking/hearing a lot re the setting of Jim Brasfield’s Celan, I hope to shift to that for a bit and come back to Let Them Not Say after a brief absence and re-setting of perspective.
In the later afternoon we headed down to a town just south of Lihu’e where we’ll stay for a few days for diving further south (Koloa) on Tuesday and Wednesday.